kehny's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[If pokemons could speak English]

Short and spot on, fantastic. Sound was dreadful, but pikachu's acting was fantastic.

TheMartoon responds:

You're too nice haha thank you!:) I'm using my laptop mic which explains but i'll be getting something better soon,along with a drawing pad cause right now i'm not even using a mouse.....i'm using the thing on the laptop you move with your fingers haha.

[Monologue by Death]

Loved the design and the acting. Great job animating the smoke.
The shadows on his cloak were kind of clipping in and out in a couple of moments.

darkn00bknight responds:

Hi Kehny,

Thanks for the feedback. I think I bit off a little more than I could chew with this. I'm gonna cut the length down for future scenes so I can clean them up some more.

[Overwatched ep 6 High Ground]

It looks rather nice. Animation was simple but spor on. Love the d-va dog, even though I fkin hate dva

Animation-Steve responds:

Haha thankyou !

[Good morning sunshine!]

Happy go lucky and dark.
Yeah, it's nice.

[New Intro made in Krita 3.1.2 | 1000 subs]

It looks awesome man! I think I'll drop by that channel.
Is it done traditionnally or is this stereoscopy? (I think that's what you call when you trace a filmed clip)

MartsArt responds:

Well it's traditional, I've made like a rectangular frame out of paper and also a stand for it(so it's not moving), then I placed my hand on the table and drew the hand while looking trough the frame
(btw it's my left hand :) I've fliped the animation afterwards to make it look like my right hand ;) )

[Quest of vengeance]

Good job. Animation and sound are lacking, but you still managed to make a cohesive story with what you had. Punchline was dreadful and out of place. The short was serious all throughout, but it ended with a gag. Comedy needs anticipation.

Anyway I still think it's a damn good job regardless, keep up the good work.

[Bunker City Pilot]

At times funny and self aware. Animation was okay, lip synching is amazing. The timing when the lizard got his tail chopped off was... off. Get it? No but really, we couldn't see the lizards reaction to the cutting, and it lacked a cutting sound effect.
Which brings me to my other problem with this short: the sound is dreadfull, it lacks a lot of ambient sounds and sound effects in general, some voice actors have better sound than others, I could really go on forever.
Keep in mind, this isn't a rant, I like this short, but those nitpicks really keep it from being amasing. Nevertheless, pretty good damn job, I'm looking forward to more of your stuff.

videojunk responds:

Yeah I plan on working on the sound for the next episode to make it actually good or I'll get someone who actually knows what they're doing to do the sound.
(I really appreciate all the critiques by the way)

[CosmicChrisTV Channel Trailer]

Dude you've been around for a while now, you seemed like a hard working guy, I've seen your stuff and I was kinda expecting something better.

All you did was put 4 assets:
head
body
2 for her left arm, possibly the worst ones
and her mouth flaps

And move them wonkily, without really any rhime or reason. The assets are not as good as any of your recent art.
You actually know better. But I think you rushed it. There's a lot of needlessly pixelated stuff as well. Sit your ass down, it takes weeks for a reason.

Trina was good though.

[Animation vs you(the viewer)]

Kinda like animator vs animation. It was okay.

Sound was dreadful, though.

awesomea900 responds:

yeah, i don't know what happened to the sound, perhaps i'll try to get better sound effects in the next animation