kehny's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Determination]

Pose is great, love the proportions in the face, and love the freaking lineart.

I see that your other pieces are not as strong as this one. This one has by far the better proportions, face, and just overall look. Like the way you're strafing away from generic anime style.
I'd strive to have your female characters, and the upcoming uploads to look this good, or better.

If you wanna get scouted, I'd absolutely recomend you make an art thread in the forum where you post all your stuff, not just turn up in the unscouted thread. Sure we have some trolls but you'd get a lot of feedback and overall good vibes.

Keep this stuff up.

JelloJake responds:

Thank you so much for the post, made my day. Thanks I'm working on a girl similar to this right now. Yeah some of my other stuff is kinda old haha.

Honestly thank you for the advice so much, I was kinda feelin lost on what to do, I'll make a thread asap!

[Dunno =I]

Hell yeah! You're back!
Nor really into that cat's smile. Look at it's left eye, it's completely out of place, well, just keep going at it.
Great colours! just overall amasing work.
See ya!

[FFXV Ignis, Gladio & Noctis]

I love Gladio's freaking expression on this, he's like "hey Noct, want some drugs?" this is perfect.
Also, Ignis looks like he's about to come up with a new recipeeeh.

SuperColoroid responds:

Haha, thanks!
Ignis LOVES recipeeehs!

[woman study #1]

Hello, I'm here again to ruin my ego by witnessing people sketching things that look better than whatever I take 2 hours to make. So I can curl up in my bed, call myself worthless, and notice I can't cry or feel frustration because I don't have a soul and my ego wouldn't allow it and I got deadlines to deal with. That girl looks better than my wife after a good session of grudge sex. 10/10 would not bang because it looks like jailbait.

[Spike]

You can just feeeeell the blues.

[Blue Devil Mural]

Nice work on the colours, I really have a problem with the way you shade, your shading style is very subtle but also very well done, still, it makes your characters look like cilinders, if you imagine them in a 3d space. Maybe it's just a style, but I'd really like to see you try a bit more complex anatomy, just to be sure you're on the right track. It's just an opinion though, take it as you will.

I don't want to be the 5 star guy here, but again, there's no big mistake here. Still, the shoulders on the first guy are just wrong, and the 4th guy (from left to right) has his left shoulder out of place. Theese tiny mistakes could kill your pics in the long run.

[Same Drugs]

Gotta say, out of all of your images, this one is the best. His face fits the whole design, and the shading is super subtle but it fits. The contrast and outline on the lips is too strong compared to the rest, it makes them pop out. I don't see any killing flaws here, hence the score.

[Fist]

I've already stated how much I like this one. But eh.
Look at that chin, that's the chin of a man.

MeGummyBall responds:

thanks, wanted to capture the manliness of the character... through the chin. I'm really glad you like it. To be honest though, yours was way better and more unique which i thank you for.

[REEEEEEEEEEEE]

I realized that. But eh. It's not my place to tell you what to draw.

I like the way you do legs and feet. Makes him look more like a teenager, hope that was the intent.

Oddlem responds:

He's supposed to be around 18-19 if that explains it. ;v;

[Lt. Justice]

Welp, I've already said what needed to be said.
You draw clothes and boobs very nicely. Got a lot to learn from ya.

Spedmallet responds:

ayy