kehny's Reviews

[Ed, Edd n Eddy in 2017]

Very reminiscent of the original. Amazing job at that. You got the character quirks right making a lot of side jokes in the meantime. Also nice animations.

While the message is old as hell, it's still relevant, unfortunately, so I won't put that against you. Also what the hell, just because the joke is old people are bashing against this with 1 to two stars. Well, teenagers will always be so.

One star out for lacking a punchline, this was just depressing. I know it's a serious message, but if you're referencing comedy, I could use a punchline haha

[Fast and Furious Forty-Five]

The ending caught me off guard, turning on the brake lights, the turning lights and such. Fucking fantastic.

[MyFakeCamGirls]

Oh that was sooo nice! Thank you babe!
Twitchgirls in a nutshell, fucking hillarious.

Love the lighting and the colors, kinda different than last time, they're actually somehow skin coloured now, for some reason.
But what really works here, is the atmosphere, the soundtrack at the begining was really setting the tone.

Blordow responds:

I went for a more realistic approach with colours this time. I love scoring my tunes, more often than not they have a dark ambience. Thanks brother.

[Wickebine Kigyouden]

God damn it it was fun throughout, nice extra boss.
Half star off because the sprites ain't yours.
But gooood daaang did the animations and gameplay feel good.
Keep up the good work. I'd love to see a 100% original work, something this could've been.

[Chronicle Bulletin #6]

I don't get it... IT's been like uh... 3 years since your first game with such drawings and almost no difference between them.
There's a difference between something that is your style and straight up bad drawings. Anatomy, colour palletes, etc etc are all wrong. I'd suggest to look up some actually good guides about anatomy and colour palletes (believe me, they're hard to find), draw some geometry bases and some muscles before you go for the final lineart. But you're not entirely clueless, chonicle bulletin #4's icon looks quite well, except for the anatomy and that face. What is up with Atom's dissapearing scar by the way? Also the jacked bad guy carries most of your best drawings, try to give that quality to the rest of the cast.
I get what you're doing though, quantity over quality, vissually at least, can't judge your writing since I'm not good at it, I can barely write a cohesive review. I could point out that you don't mix suspense and comic relief very well. Was death supposed to look funny?
That said, you managed to make hours worth of a story in about two years, that alone deserves 4 stars. I'd give three but by newgrounds standards that equals a 0. Eh, go figure.

JackAstral responds:

I dunno it really kinda is just the art style. Kinda doodles mixed with anime-ish stuff, it's weird but I think it fits in a weird way lol

I'm doing a project next year, where I'm going to be spending a lot more time on the visuals, though. So hopefully that maybe looks a little cooler

Thanks for the detailed review - they can really help me improve sometimes :-)

[DX Bomber]

Wow I'm kinda into this.
I love theese kind of songs. Going all keyboard.

Teckmo-X responds:

Thank you! It's an old project file back from 2012 that I finished up.

[Wrong Number]

I fucking love this.
MayyyyyBE

[Pass the... (inspired by Fistful of Frags)]

needs more pass the whiskey

retroarcademonkey responds:

not enough passing of the whiskey... not enough...

[Determination]

Pose is great, love the proportions in the face, and love the freaking lineart.

I see that your other pieces are not as strong as this one. This one has by far the better proportions, face, and just overall look. Like the way you're strafing away from generic anime style.
I'd strive to have your female characters, and the upcoming uploads to look this good, or better.

If you wanna get scouted, I'd absolutely recomend you make an art thread in the forum where you post all your stuff, not just turn up in the unscouted thread. Sure we have some trolls but you'd get a lot of feedback and overall good vibes.

Keep this stuff up.

JelloJake responds:

Thank you so much for the post, made my day. Thanks I'm working on a girl similar to this right now. Yeah some of my other stuff is kinda old haha.

Honestly thank you for the advice so much, I was kinda feelin lost on what to do, I'll make a thread asap!

[Dunno =I]

Hell yeah! You're back!
Nor really into that cat's smile. Look at it's left eye, it's completely out of place, well, just keep going at it.
Great colours! just overall amasing work.
See ya!

[FFXV Ignis, Gladio & Noctis]

I love Gladio's freaking expression on this, he's like "hey Noct, want some drugs?" this is perfect.
Also, Ignis looks like he's about to come up with a new recipeeeh.

SuperColoroid responds:

Haha, thanks!
Ignis LOVES recipeeehs!